You may well need to include more details, but if you put the important point up front, your email is more likely to get a timely response.
Humanity is vigorous, used to the human characteristics of the military, inclusive, broad-minded open consciousness, to assess the situation, the innovative spirit of timely response.
Schedule and monitor project program activity to achieve an on-time result including follow-up with related departments or external subcontractors to ensure timely response.
