增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在其下面写上该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉.修改:在错的词下划...

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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在其下面写上该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉.修改:在错的词下划...

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在其下面写上该加的词.

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉.

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分.

I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks before.I have been thinking about the question you ask me.In my opinion,you should come back after finished your studies abroad.For one reason,that you are studying is badly needed nowadays in our country.It will be quite easily for you to find a good job.In fact,I know a few big company in our city hope to hire people like you.For other reason,I think it will be too more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old.And this is only my point of view.It is up to you to make right choice.

【回答】

I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks before.I have been thinking about the question you ask me.In my opinion,you should come back after finished your studies abroad.For one reason,that you are studying is badly needed nowadays in our country.It will be quite easily for you to find a good job.In fact,I know a few big company in our city hope to hire people like you.For other reason,I think it will be too more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old.And this is only my point of view.It is up to you to make∧right choice.

1.before改为ago;副词错误.two weeks ago两周前,句意表达的是过去,一般过去时态中要用ago来表示;before作时间状语时,通常用于完成时态中.

2.ask改为asked;时态错误.句意表达的是过去发生的动作,要用一般过去时态.

3.finished改为finishing;动名词错误.句中finish作介词after的宾语,要用动名词形式.

4.that改为what;连词错误.句中you are studying作主语,是一个主语从句;从句studying缺少宾语,且指的是物,要用what来连接.

5.easily改为easy;形容词错误.句中easy作系动词的表语,要用形容词形式.

6.company改为companies;名词错误.句中有a few修饰,名词要用复数.

7.other改为another;形容词错误.other别的,其它的,后接复数名词;another表示不定数目中的另一个,后接单数名词.

8.too去掉;比较级错误.句中more用来构成convenient的比较级;too more是too many/much的比较级,不可混用;此外too容易和后面的to一起引起歧义,too…to…太…而不能…

9.And改为But;连词错误.句意表达的是转折,不是并列.

10.加a;冠词错误.make a right choice作出正确的选择.

知识点:其他

题型:短文改错